I step in the murky water leaving my father and sister
behind. As I walk, sticks and leaves latch on to me and follow me as I step further
into the mush. Then it happens. Everyone goes. No horn. No gunshot. No indication
that the event has started but I follow.
The phone
rings as I sit in my dorm room studying for finals before winter break. It’s my
pops. He asks how things are going and eventually cuts to the chase. He tells me
that he’s going to participate in a 4.4 mile swim spanning the Bay Bridge
called the Bay Swim and asks if I want in. 4.4 miles, you done lost your mind!
Alright, I’m in. I’m always up for new things and love the challenge.
Now I’m
getting kicked. Somebody’s ankle has left an imprint on my head. I have to look
up every two seconds to make sure I’m going straight because Lord knows I
zigzag. When I look up, I see these old geezers swimming past me. These bags of
bones are smoking me! But I’m only focused on me. I’m not in it to win it, just
to finish.
A quarter
of a mile in and my shoulders start burning with each stroke. I expected this.
It’s alright. As long as I keep this pace, the pain will go away. It’s dark; I
can’t see anything. The bay is so dirty that there could be a neon dance party
below me and I wouldn’t see it. I’m getting bored. Again, no scenery to look
at, just blackness. Eventually, I finish. More like stumble across the line. Afterwards,
I see my dad and sister and we all realize that we have dirt mustaches from the
dirty water and laugh. That bay was a mess.
I find that trying new things always turns out to be
rewarding in one way or another.
(300 words)
real good story, the imagery was great. Maybe improve the dramatic question.
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